Reduce noise

It is rare that there is any practical need to write a letter to the tribunal or the other side longer than a page and a half. If you have written long letter, the chances are that much of it is just ‘noise’ that will obscure your real message and make it less likely that you get what you want.

Show, don’t tell

This is advice often give to aspiring novelists. The idea is that your story will be more vivid if you let the characters of the people you are writing about emerge from their actions than if you just describe what they are like. When you write your witness statement, you are telling a story. Unlike a novel, your statement must be true. But ‘show, don’t tell’ is still good advice.